Revision
it is not just hard, it is time consuming!
Presentation/Style
-cover page/header
-font/font size
-paragraphing
-citations or notes and references
the problems:
-verb tense: be consistent
-syntax: run-on (the comma splice)
make clear connections between subjects and verbs
use conjunctions AND commas, combine independent clauses
-verb agreement
-vocabulary(use the correct vocabulary, and look it up in a dictionary)
-word counting: the essay only! use the tools to count.
tasks:
proposal(short documents style) next week(8-10 sentences), with the bibliography(APA STYLE) (8-12, and no more than 2 from the internet, at least one must be a periodical.)due week ten.
group work 4A "Douglas Coupland"
read "What a Certain Visionary Once Said" and answer the questions, due week 11