Revision is necessary:
Presentation/style
Font and font size
Paragraphing
Reference
The problems are:
Verb
Grammar mistake
The common splice
Semicolon-make clear connection between subject and object
Verb agreement
Parallelism Word count not include reference page
Next Week due
Proposal( Informative essay) meeting
In Informative essay- no opinion only informative material
It include:
Proposal and Preliminary Bibliography
Proposal should be 8-10 sentence
Short document style
1 paragraph
Should be start with theses statement-It is very important part
In Preliminary Bibliography-
APA style
8- 12 different sources
2 sources from internet
Others from journals,magazine,news paper.
Reading a topic"What a certain visionary once said" Teacher information sheet #1
It will found in open discussion. Then answer the questions.due week 11.
Week 12 assignment about annotated bibliography.It is group work.