Informative Essay Proposal

hello everyone, here is my essay proposal.

My informative essay will be about same sex marriage in Canada. It is a big topic, with many issues and debates that evolve around it. To some individuals this is a very awkward subject to talk about along with accepting the activity. Why though? Isn't marriage just about love and commitment between two people? The existence of same sex marriage challenges our understanding of the relationship. Individuals are concerned with how the relationship works and how an individual can be interested in the same sex. This is one of the matters I will be investigating throughout my essay. Along with, what is the history of same sex couples and how was it evolved? What was the process of legalization of same-sex marriage?

Looking forward to any feed back, please be kind thanks!

- Alisha

This is an awesome topic!
You can even mention how in America only some states have legalized same sex marriage while others haven't, some states even ban same sex marriage, if you don't want to just focus on Canada.
Even talk about the statistics of same sex marriage in Canada.
I would love to read your finished essay!
Take care,
Quinn

Be very careful not to take a position.

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To some individuals this is a very awkward subject to talk about along with accepting the activity. Why though? Isn't marriage just about love and commitment between two people?

This is not looking at the history but expressing your opinion. Remember this is an informative essay and the marks are all about just that. A history of same sex marriage in Canada would work perfectly well.

Awsome topic

thanks everyone for the feedback. it really helped!

oh no!
Remember that your first sentence in the proposal is supposed to be your proposal..
Other then that good work!
Just remember not to take a side