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Tamibear



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PostSubject: Essay Proposal    Essay Proposal  EmptyFri Nov 02, 2012 5:09 pm

Yahooooo everyone bounce

here, the new version of my proposal Arrow

Oil, Watercolour, and Charcoal, are painting mediums which were used by art professionals for centuries. Acrylics on the other hand are fairly new but have established a reputable status within the industry. With my essay I wish to explore where this new medium came from, how it evolved and revolutionized the creative world? Who are the professionals which embraced the new tool to create their art? What are some well-known paintings which promoted acrylics? What are the benefits of Acrylics? Why has it become so popular?

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rebmon177



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PostSubject: Re: Essay Proposal    Essay Proposal  EmptySat Nov 03, 2012 12:56 pm

it sounds so much clearer than before tami! with room for substantial, solid information in your essay. at least that's what I think. Wink

i'm not sure you need the comma after "Charcoal" in your first sentence. and your third sentence you have a question mark, but it doesn't read like a question, it reads like a statement.

cheers!!
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Tamibear



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PostSubject: Re: Essay Proposal    Essay Proposal  EmptyTue Nov 06, 2012 6:14 pm

Greetings my friend Very Happy

Its soooooo funny! Rebecca here just told that its YOU Rebecca! LOL Laughing

Thanks for your advice on my proposal. And sorry for posting mine in your section... Rolling Eyes *BLUSH

See you tomorrow cheers

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