so I've started my essay and I thought I would post a piece of my essay.
my essay will be on the negative effects of corporal punishment. this is what I have for my intro so far ( I feel like I need to add more in my intro). Let me know what you think.... I need all the help I can get
The negative effects of corporal punishment
A relationship between a child and their parent is very critical in the development and success of the child. As the parent, adults have the most influence on their child. In society we commonly see parents play the superior role, while the child plays the inferior role. Parents are to teach their child right from wrong, good from bad, and other basic components of life while children are expected to obey their parents and respect their wishes. But what happens when the child chooses not to obey their parents? How should that child be punished? The practice of Corporal punishment is common amongst Canadians due to Canada’s multicultural population. Augments has arose questioning corporal punishment as an effective mean of punishment. The content of this essay will demonstrate a variety of negative effects corporal punishment may have on a child.