We talked about the research paper today in class.
Teacher made important points on what to avoid when writing the introduction and conclusion in the research paper.
For introduction we should avoid the use of A, B ,C main points, such as they do in high school.
Restatin the main points from the introduction in the conclusion again, is a bad idea.
Introduction and conclusion should be more "open", not as stiffed and boring as they are taught in high school.
Also in the research paper, is important to avoid the use of the 2nd or 3rd person.
Do not use anonymous as a reference in your paper. Avoid this.
Journal #2 is due next week. We have to read : 1) What certain visionary once said
2)The most offensive commercial ever.